Hw pg 18 kristy

1- Rich supporting details
2- Yes, the writer wrote about her grandmother's house and the reader will want to know more about it.
3- The writer uses the senses as follow:
* Hearing
* Smelling
The words or sentences are:
- hundred of sounds and smells of happiness
- Birds chirping
- My grand ma would sing
- A man's smooth radio voice spoke.
- Clanking and pulling
- the smell of fresh bread
-gardenia perfume
- I can hear and smell those
4- Birds chirping : because when you hear birds chirping is like you start hearing the birds.
The smell of fresh bread will make your mouth watery it is like you start craving for bread
gardenia perfume. it is like you are smelling the gardenia perfume
5- I would like that the writer would write more about her grand ma sickness and describe it more, also elaborate more about her dult life, last but not least she needs to write a conclusion.
6- The writer Ideas are not clear and she needs to work on the transitional words.