Tuesday, June 8, 2010

Knight Watch

Night watch
I t is a great feeling when you help someone in need. I experienced that awesome feeling when I came to United State of America and helped my sister. I did house work for her and baby site her two years old son because she was eight month pregnant and she could take care of her family. I was very happy that I came at the right time. In addition, I was there for her also when she needed me during the most critical time of her life which is her divorce. I supported her with my comforting words and my money. I even babysit her kids to allow her to go to college and have a degree. I was thrilled to see her come over her divorce and start a new life with her two kids.

1 comment:

  1. This is a response that clearly shares similar experiences to the narrative. A very good use of tense in your re-telling of events but just watch your spelling. 10/10

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