Topic: Favorite place
Audience: teacher and students
Purpose: to convince the audience that Casablanca is my favorite place
A favorite place is usually a place where people find happiness and peace. My favorite place is Casablanca. It’s a place where my parents and I were born. Casablanca is a beautiful city that lies in the Atlantic Ocean and has a mild weather never too hot or too cold. In Casablanca I have a lot of memories that I cherish a lot. Some of my favorite things that I use to do are spending the whole summer at the beach where I palyed tennis and swam with my family. Forthermore the people are kind, the envirnment is always warm, and the food is tasty especialy the couscous. On the conclusion Casablanca is a nice city that will make you fascinated by mixing the ancient and modern artchitecture
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I really want to go to Casablanca! You don't have to convince me!
ReplyDeleteIs Casablanca in the Atlantic Ocean (an island?) or is it next to the ocean? Tell me more about the architecture. What do you like about it?
Things to fix:
commas after introductory phrases!
--k :-)